From ded6e085fdb6b64d676e96de15e59c0f657c658f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Patricio Paez <pp@pp.com.mx>
Date: Sun, 29 May 2011 16:05:07 -0500
Subject: Improvements to Adding Authorization of the wiki tutorials

---
 docs/tutorials/wiki/authorization.rst  | 18 ++++++++++++++++--
 docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'docs/tutorials')

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki/authorization.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki/authorization.rst
index e4480d6d9..dbfcb55d5 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki/authorization.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki/authorization.rst
@@ -32,10 +32,17 @@ Adding Authentication and Authorization Policies
 
 We'll change our package's ``__init__.py`` file to enable an
 ``AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy`` and an ``ACLAuthorizationPolicy`` to enable
-declarative security checking.  When you're done, your ``__init__.py`` will
-look like so:
+declarative security checking. We need to import the new policies:
+
+.. literalinclude:: src/authorization/tutorial/__init__.py
+   :lines: 4-5,8
+   :linenos:
+   :language: python
+
+Then, we'll add those policies to the configuration:
 
 .. literalinclude:: src/authorization/tutorial/__init__.py
+   :lines: 16-18,26-28
    :linenos:
    :language: python
 
@@ -46,6 +53,13 @@ by this policy: it is required.  The ``callback`` is a reference to a
 ``groupfinder`` function in the ``tutorial`` package's ``security.py`` file.
 We haven't added that module yet, but we're about to.
 
+When you're done, your ``__init__.py`` will
+look like so:
+
+.. literalinclude:: src/authorization/tutorial/__init__.py
+   :linenos:
+   :language: python
+
 Adding ``security.py``
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
index b1d3b0001..43231287d 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ view, edit, and add pages to our wiki.  For purposes of demonstration
 we'll change our application to allow only people whom possess a
 specific username (`editor`) to add and edit wiki pages but we'll
 continue allowing anyone with access to the server to view pages.
-:app:`Pyramid` provides facilities for *authorization* and
-*authentication*.  We'll make use of both features to provide security
+:app:`Pyramid` provides facilities for :term:`authorization` and
+:term:`authentication`.  We'll make use of both features to provide security
 to our application.
 
 The source code for this tutorial stage can be browsed at
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ and adding views, your application's ``__init__.py`` will look like this:
    :language: python
 
 Adding ``security.py``
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+----------------------
 
 Add a ``security.py`` module within your package (in the same directory as
 :file:`__init__.py`, :file:`views.py`, etc) with the following content:
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ and the permission associated with the ``add_page`` and ``edit_page``
 views, the ``editor`` user should be able to add and edit pages.
 
 Adding Login and Logout Views
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+-----------------------------
 
 We'll add a ``login`` view callable which renders a login form and
 processes the post from the login form, checking credentials.
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ content:
    :language: python
 
 Changing Existing Views
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+-----------------------
 
 Then we need to change each of our ``view_page``, ``edit_page`` and
 ``add_page`` views in ``views.py`` to pass a "logged in" parameter to its
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ We'll then change the return value of these views to pass the `resulting
                edit_url = edit_url)
 
 Adding the ``login.pt`` Template
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+--------------------------------
 
 Add a ``login.pt`` template to your templates directory.  It's
 referred to within the login view we just added to ``login.py``.
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ referred to within the login view we just added to ``login.py``.
    :language: xml
 
 Change ``view.pt`` and ``edit.pt``
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+----------------------------------
 
 We'll also need to change our ``edit.pt`` and ``view.pt`` templates to
 display a "Logout" link if someone is logged in.  This link will
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