From e266bc346f161087037647084c92c4ad26de2739 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Steve Piercy Date: Mon, 21 Jan 2013 04:05:24 -0800 Subject: Grammar: either "e.g.", or "etc.", but not both in the same phrase. --- docs/tutorials/wiki/installation.rst | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'docs/tutorials/wiki') diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki/installation.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki/installation.rst index 488ab1883..b545cdba0 100644 --- a/docs/tutorials/wiki/installation.rst +++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki/installation.rst @@ -193,8 +193,7 @@ assumptions: .. note:: - :app:`Pyramid` supports any persistent storage mechanism (e.g. a SQL - database or filesystem files, etc). :app:`Pyramid` also supports an - additional mechanism to map URLs to code (:term:`URL dispatch`). However, - for the purposes of this tutorial, we'll only be using traversal and ZODB. - + :app:`Pyramid` supports any persistent storage mechanism (e.g., a SQL + database or filesystem files). :app:`Pyramid` also supports an additional + mechanism to map URLs to code (:term:`URL dispatch`). However, for the + purposes of this tutorial, we'll only be using traversal and ZODB. -- cgit v1.2.3