From c5f24b2957a2a7569d70930ac5bc630cc5aaac55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris McDonough <chrism@agendaless.com>
Date: Mon, 18 Jan 2010 18:07:12 +0000
Subject: Prep for b1

Merge a bunch of paper-based docs fixes

Configure logging during bfgshell.
---
 docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/authorization.rst |  4 ++--
 docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/basiclayout.rst   | 14 +++++++-------
 docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst  |  2 +-
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'docs/tutorials/bfgwiki')

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/authorization.rst b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/authorization.rst
index b2c5330f6..1b83d3651 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/authorization.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/authorization.rst
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@ content:
    :language: python
 
 The ``groupfinder`` function defined here is an authorization policy
-"callback"; it is a a callable that accepts a userid and a request.
-If the userid exists in the set of users known by the system, the
+"callback"; it is a callable that accepts a userid and a request.  If
+the userid exists in the set of users known by the system, the
 callback will return a sequence of group identifiers (or an empty
 sequence if the user isn't a member of any groups).  If the userid
 *does not* exist in the system, the callback will return ``None``.
diff --git a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/basiclayout.rst b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/basiclayout.rst
index 213f238fd..c2b2ebd4b 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/basiclayout.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/basiclayout.rst
@@ -106,32 +106,32 @@ function within the file named ``run.py``:
       :linenos:
       :language: py
 
-#. *Lines 1-3*.  Perform some dependency imports.
+#. *Lines 1-2*.  Perform some dependency imports.
 
-#. *Line 11*. Get the ZODB configuration from the ``tutorial.ini``
+#. *Line 12*. Get the ZODB configuration from the ``tutorial.ini``
    file's ``[app:main]`` section represented by the ``settings``
    dictionary passed to our ``app`` function.  This will be a URI
    (something like ``file:///path/to/Data.fs``).
 
-#. *Line 14*. We create a "finder" object using the
+#. *Line 15*. We create a "finder" object using the
    ``PersistentApplicationFinder`` helper class, passing it the ZODB
    URI and the "appmaker" we've imported from ``models.py``.
 
-#. *Lines 15 - 16*.  We create a :term:`root factory` which uses the
+#. *Lines 16 - 17*.  We create a :term:`root factory` which uses the
    finder to return a ZODB root object.
 
-#. *Line 17*.  We construct a :term:`Configurator` with a :term:`root
+#. *Line 18*.  We construct a :term:`Configurator` with a :term:`root
    factory` and the settings keywords parsed by PasteDeploy.  The root
    factory is named ``get_root``.
 
-#. *Lines 18-20*.  Begin configuration using the ``begin`` method of
+#. *Lines 19-21*.  Begin configuration using the ``begin`` method of
    the :meth:`repoze.bfg.configuration.Configurator` class, load the
    ``configure.zcml`` file from our package using the
    :meth:`repoze.bfg.configuration.Configurator.load_zcml` method, and
    end configuration using the
    :meth:`repoze.bfg.configuration.Configurator.end` method.
 
-#. *Line 21*.  Use the
+#. *Line 22*.  Use the
    :meth:`repoze.bfg.configuration.Configurator.make_wsgi_app` method
    to return a :term:`WSGI` application.
 
diff --git a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
index fcfaff642..4f1e5a34f 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ Preparation, Windows
 
    .. code-block:: bat
 
-     c:\bigfntut> Scripts/easy_install -i \
+     c:\bigfntut> Scripts\easy_install -i \
             http://dist.repoze.org/bfg/current/simple repoze.bfg
 
 #. Use ``easy_install`` to install ``docutils``, ``repoze.tm``,
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