From 823ef1d9c931106de11e7d383856fcc2fc99c3fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Steve Piercy <web@stevepiercy.com>
Date: Sat, 16 Apr 2016 04:26:05 -0700
Subject: quick_tutorial cleanup - cleanup debugtoolbar.rst

---
 docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst | 53 ++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)

(limited to 'docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst')

diff --git a/docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst b/docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst
index 1f89cd319..aaf904390 100644
--- a/docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst
+++ b/docs/quick_tutorial/debugtoolbar.rst
@@ -6,31 +6,34 @@
 
 Error handling and introspection using the ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` add-on.
 
+
 Background
 ==========
 
-As we introduce the basics we also want to show how to be productive in
-development and debugging. For example, we just discussed template
-reloading and earlier we showed ``--reload`` for application reloading.
+As we introduce the basics, we also want to show how to be productive in
+development and debugging. For example, we just discussed template reloading,
+and earlier we showed ``--reload`` for application reloading.
+
+``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` is a popular Pyramid add-on which makes several tools
+available in your browser. Adding it to your project illustrates several points
+about configuration.
 
-``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` is a popular Pyramid add-on which makes
-several tools available in your browser. Adding it to your project
-illustrates several points about configuration.
 
 Objectives
 ==========
 
-- Install and enable the toolbar to help during development
+- Install and enable the toolbar to help during development.
+
+- Explain Pyramid add-ons.
 
-- Explain Pyramid add-ons
+- Show how an add-on gets configured into your application.
 
-- Show how an add-on gets configured into your application
 
 Steps
 =====
 
-#. First we copy the results of the previous step, as well as install
-   the ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` package:
+#. First we copy the results of the previous step, as well as install the
+   ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` package:
 
    .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -54,6 +57,7 @@ Steps
 #. Open http://localhost:6543/ in your browser. See the handy
    toolbar on the right.
 
+
 Analysis
 ========
 
@@ -66,16 +70,16 @@ The ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` Python package is also a Pyramid add-on, which
 means we need to include its add-on configuration into our web application. We
 could do this with imperative configuration in ``tutorial/__init__.py`` by
 using ``config.include``. Pyramid also supports wiring in add-on configuration
-via our ``development.ini`` using ``pyramid.includes``. We use this to load
-the configuration for the debugtoolbar.
+via our ``development.ini`` using ``pyramid.includes``. We use this to load the
+configuration for the debugtoolbar.
 
 You'll now see an attractive button on the right side of your browser, which
-you may click to provide introspective access to debugging information in a
-new browser tab. Even better, if your web application generates an error, you
-will see a nice traceback on the screen. When you want to disable this
-toolbar, there's no need to change code: you can remove it from
-``pyramid.includes`` in the relevant ``.ini`` configuration file (thus showing
-why configuration files are handy.)
+you may click to provide introspective access to debugging information in a new
+rowser tab. Even better, if your web application generates an error, you will
+see a nice traceback on the screen. When you want to disable this toolbar,
+there's no need to change code: you can remove it from ``pyramid.includes`` in
+the relevant ``.ini`` configuration file (thus showing why configuration files
+are handy).
 
 Note that the toolbar injects a small amount of HTML/CSS into your app just
 before the closing ``</body>`` tag in order to display itself. If you start to
@@ -85,13 +89,14 @@ temporarily.
 
 .. seealso:: See also :ref:`pyramid_debugtoolbar <toolbar:overview>`.
 
+
 Extra Credit
 ============
 
 #. Why don't we add ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` to the list of
    ``install_requires`` dependencies in ``debugtoolbar/setup.py``?
 
-#. Introduce a bug into your application:  Change:
+#. Introduce a bug into your application. Change:
 
    .. code-block:: python
 
@@ -105,7 +110,7 @@ Extra Credit
     def hello_world(request):
         return xResponse('<body><h1>Hello World!</h1></body>')
 
-   Save, and visit http://localhost:6543/ again.  Notice the nice
-   traceback display.  On the lowest line, click the "screen" icon to the
-   right, and try typing the variable names ``request`` and ``Response``.
-   What else can you discover?
+   Save, and visit http://localhost:6543/ again. Notice the nice traceback
+   display. On the lowest line, click the "screen" icon to the right, and try
+   typing the variable names ``request`` and ``Response``. What else can you
+   discover?
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