Merge pull request #887 from tshepang/concise

be more concise; simplify; remove obvious info

2 files changed, 4 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/docs/narr/paste.rst b/docs/narr/paste.rst
index 86b047aec..aee5f9069 100644
--- a/docs/narr/paste.rst
+++ b/docs/narr/paste.rst
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Take a look at the generated ``setup.py`` file for this project.
    :language: python
    :linenos:
 
-Note that the ``entry_point`` line in ``setup.py`` points at a string which
+Note that ``entry_points`` is assigned a string which
 looks a lot like an ``.ini`` file.  This string representation of an ``.ini``
 file has a section named ``[paste.app_factory]``.  Within this section, there
 is a key named ``main`` (the entry point name) which has a value
diff --git a/docs/narr/project.rst b/docs/narr/project.rst
index 5ddf89ec4..214440328 100644
--- a/docs/narr/project.rst
+++ b/docs/narr/project.rst
@@ -459,20 +459,9 @@ Put a hash mark at the beginning of the ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` line:
 Then restart the application to see that the toolbar has been turned off.
 
 Note that if you comment out the ``pyramid_debugtoolbar`` line, the ``#``
-*must* be in the first column.  If you put the hash mark anywhere except the
-first column instead, for example like this:
-
-.. code-block:: ini
-   :linenos:
-
-   [app:main]
-   ...
-   pyramid.includes =
-       #pyramid_debugtoolbar
-
-When you attempt to restart the application with a section like the above
-you'll receive an error that ends something like this, and the application
-will not start:
+*must* be in the first column.  If you put it anywhere else,
+and then attempt to restart the application,
+you'll receive an error that ends something like this:
 
 .. code-block:: text