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authorTshepang Lekhonkhobe <tshepang@gmail.com>2013-01-05 19:28:09 +0200
committerTshepang Lekhonkhobe <tshepang@gmail.com>2013-01-05 19:28:09 +0200
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@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ returns one of these values:
- If the userid *does not* exist in the system, it will
return ``None``.
-For example, ``groupfinder('editor', request )`` returns ['group:editor'],
+For example, ``groupfinder('editor', request )`` returns ``['group:editor']``,
``groupfinder('viewer', request)`` returns [], and ``groupfinder('admin', request)``
returns ``None``. We will use ``groupfinder()`` as an :term:`authentication policy`
"callback" that will provide the :term:`principal` or principals
@@ -151,10 +151,10 @@ Now add those policies to the configuration:
(Only the highlighted lines need to be added.)
-We are enabling an ``AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy``, it is based in an
-auth ticket that may be included in the request, and an
-``ACLAuthorizationPolicy`` that uses an ACL to determine the allow or deny
-outcome for a view.
+We are enabling an ``AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy``, which is based in an
+auth ticket that may be included in the request.
+We are also enabling an ``ACLAuthorizationPolicy``, which uses an ACL to
+determine the *allow* or *deny* outcome for a view.
Note that the :class:`pyramid.authentication.AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy`
constructor accepts two arguments: ``secret`` and ``callback``. ``secret`` is