wiki2 docs update WIP

- minor grammar, .rst syntax
- add pip to glossary
- add pip instructions, commented until 1.7 is released

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/index.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/index.rst
index 74fb5bfd5..18e9f552e 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/index.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/index.rst
@@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
 .. _bfg_sql_wiki_tutorial:
 
-SQLAlchemy + URL Dispatch Wiki Tutorial
+SQLAlchemy + URL dispatch wiki tutorial
 =======================================
 
-This tutorial introduces a :term:`SQLAlchemy` and :term:`url dispatch`-based
+This tutorial introduces an :term:`SQLAlchemy` and :term:`URL dispatch`-based
 :app:`Pyramid` application to a developer familiar with Python.  When the
-tutorial is finished, the developer will have created a basic Wiki
-application with authentication.
+tutorial is finished, the developer will have created a basic wiki
+application with authentication and authorization.
 
-For cut and paste purposes, the source code for all stages of this
-tutorial can be browsed on GitHub at `docs/tutorials/wiki2/src
+For cut and paste purposes, the source code for all stages of this tutorial can
+be browsed on GitHub at `docs/tutorials/wiki2/src
 <https://github.com/Pylons/pyramid/tree/master/docs/tutorials/wiki2/src>`_,
 which corresponds to the same location if you have Pyramid sources.