Merge branch 'master' of github.com:Pylons/pyramid

1 files changed, 20 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/definingviews.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/definingviews.rst
index a54996e3c..e83a88198 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/definingviews.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/definingviews.rst
@@ -16,9 +16,6 @@ instance, if a call to :meth:`pyramid.config.Configurator.add_route` in
 have a ``'one'`` key with the value ``'foo'`` and a ``'two'`` key with the
 value ``'bar'``.
 
-The source code for this tutorial stage can be browsed at
-`http://github.com/Pylons/pyramid/tree/1.3-branch/docs/tutorials/wiki2/src/views/
-<http://github.com/Pylons/pyramid/tree/1.3-branch/docs/tutorials/wiki2/src/views/>`_.
 
 Declaring Dependencies in Our ``setup.py`` File
 ===============================================
@@ -26,7 +23,7 @@ Declaring Dependencies in Our ``setup.py`` File
 The view code in our application will depend on a package which is not a
 dependency of the original "tutorial" application.  The original "tutorial"
 application was generated by the ``pcreate`` command; it doesn't know
-about our custom application requirements.  
+about our custom application requirements.
 
 We need to add a dependency on the ``docutils`` package to our ``tutorial``
 package's ``setup.py`` file by assigning this dependency to the ``requires`` parameter in ``setup()``.
@@ -123,14 +120,14 @@ the :class:`pyramid.interfaces.IResponse` interface like
 
 It uses the :meth:`pyramid.request.Request.route_url` API to construct a 
 URL to the ``FrontPage`` page (e.g. ``http://localhost:6543/FrontPage``), which 
-is used as the "location" of the HTTPFound response, forming an HTTP redirect.
+is used as the "location" of the ``HTTPFound`` response, forming an HTTP redirect.
 
 The ``view_page`` view function
 -------------------------------
 
 ``view_page()`` is used to display a single page of our
 wiki.  It renders the :term:`ReStructuredText` body of a page (stored as
-the ``data`` attribute of a Page object) as HTML.  Then it substitutes an
+the ``data`` attribute of a ``Page`` model object) as HTML.  Then it substitutes an
 HTML anchor for each *WikiWord* reference in the rendered HTML using a
 compiled regular expression.
 
@@ -139,12 +136,12 @@ compiled regular expression.
    :linenos:
    :language: python
 
-The curried ``check()`` function is used as the first argument to
+The ``check()`` function is used as the first argument to
 ``wikiwords.sub``, indicating that it should be called to provide a value for
 each WikiWord match found in the content.  If the wiki already contains a
 page with the matched WikiWord name, ``check()`` generates a view
 link to be used as the substitution value and returns it.  If the wiki does
-not already contain a page with with the matched WikiWord name, ``check()``
+not already contain a page with the matched WikiWord name, ``check()``
 generates an "add" link as the substitution value and returns it.
 
 As a result, the ``content`` variable is now a fully formed bit of HTML
@@ -181,6 +178,13 @@ the page we'd like to add.  If our add view is invoked via,
 e.g. ``http://localhost:6543/add_page/SomeName``, the value for
 ``'pagename'`` in the ``matchdict`` will be ``'SomeName'``.
 
+If the view execution *is* a result of a form submission (i.e. the expression
+``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``True``), we scrape the page body
+from the form data, create a Page object with this page body and the name
+taken from ``matchdict['pagename']``, and save it into the database using
+``DBSession.add``.  We then redirect back to the ``view_page`` view for the
+newly created page.
+
 If the view execution is *not* a result of a form submission (i.e. the
 expression ``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``False``), the view
 callable renders a template.  To do so, it generates a "save url" which the
@@ -191,13 +195,6 @@ in order to satisfy the edit form's desire to have *some* page object
 exposed as ``page``. :app:`Pyramid` will render the template associated
 with this view to a response.
 
-If the view execution *is* a result of a form submission (i.e. the expression
-``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``True``), we scrape the page body
-from the form data, create a Page object with this page body and the name
-taken from ``matchdict['pagename']``, and save it into the database using
-``DBSession.add``.  We then redirect back to the ``view_page`` view for the
-newly created page.
-
 The ``edit_page`` view function
 -------------------------------
 
@@ -212,17 +209,17 @@ matching the name of the page the user wants to edit.
    :linenos:
    :language: python
 
-If the view execution is *not* a result of a form submission (i.e. the
-expression ``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``False``), the view
-simply renders the edit form, passing the page object and a ``save_url``
-which will be used as the action of the generated form.
-
 If the view execution *is* a result of a form submission (i.e. the expression
 ``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``True``), the view grabs the
 ``body`` element of the request parameters and sets it as the ``data``
 attribute of the page object.  It then redirects to the ``view_page`` view
 of the wiki page.
 
+If the view execution is *not* a result of a form submission (i.e. the
+expression ``'form.submitted' in request.params`` is ``False``), the view
+simply renders the edit form, passing the page object and a ``save_url``
+which will be used as the action of the generated form.
+
 Adding Templates
 ================
 
@@ -342,7 +339,7 @@ something like:
 .. literalinclude:: src/views/tutorial/__init__.py
    :linenos:
    :language: python
-   :emphasize-lines: 17-20
+   :emphasize-lines: 18-21
 
 (The highlighted lines are the ones that need to be added or edited.)
 
@@ -358,7 +355,7 @@ each of the following URLs, check that the result is as expected:
   of the FrontPage page object.
 
 - ``http://localhost:6543/FrontPage`` in a browser invokes
-  the ``view_page`` view of the front page page object.
+  the ``view_page`` view of the front page object.
 
 - ``http://localhost:6543/FrontPage/edit_page`` in a browser
   invokes the edit view for the front page object.
@@ -366,7 +363,7 @@ each of the following URLs, check that the result is as expected:
 - ``http://localhost:6543/add_page/SomePageName`` in a
   browser invokes the add view for a page.
 
-- To generate an error, visit ``http://localhost:6543/add_page`` which
+- To generate an error, visit ``http://localhost:6543/foobars/edit_page`` which
   will generate a ``NoResultFound: No row was found for one()`` error.
   You'll see an interactive traceback facility provided 
   by :term:`pyramid_debugtoolbar`.