change some slightly awkward wording

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/basiclayout.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/basiclayout.rst
index 6d6287126..0193afab4 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/basiclayout.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/basiclayout.rst
@@ -132,11 +132,10 @@ Finally, ``main`` is finished configuring things, so it uses the
 View Declarations via ``views.py``
 ----------------------------------
 
-Arguably, the main function of a web framework is mapping each URL
-patterns, see :term:`route`, to code, see :term:`view callable`, that is 
-executed when the requested URL matches the corresponding :term:`route`. Our 
-application uses the :meth:`pyramid.view.view_config` decorator to perform 
-this mapping.
+The main function of a web framework is mapping each URL pattern to code (a
+:term:`view callable`) that is executed when the requested URL matches the
+corresponding :term:`route`. Our application uses the
+:meth:`pyramid.view.view_config` decorator to perform this mapping.
 
 Open ``tutorial/tutorial/views.py``.  It should already contain the following:
 
@@ -228,10 +227,10 @@ To give a simple example of a  model class, we define one named ``MyModel``:
 
 Our example model has an ``__init__`` method that takes two arguments
 (``name``, and ``value``).  It stores these values as ``self.name`` and
-``self.value`` within the ``__init__`` function itself.  The ``MyModel`` class 
-also has a ``__tablename__`` attribute.  This informs SQLAlchemy which table 
-to use to store the data representing instances of this class.
-
-That's about all there is to it with models, views, and initialization code in
-our stock application.
+``self.value`` on the instance created by the ``__init__`` function itself.
+The ``MyModel`` class also has a ``__tablename__`` attribute.  This informs
+SQLAlchemy which table to use to store the data representing instances of this
+class.
 
+That's about all there is to it regarding models, views, and initialization
+code in our stock application.