Merge pull request #770 from tshepang/split

sentence too long; also fix grammar, and add markup

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
index cfbc8ca75..e43519ac9 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/wiki2/authorization.rst
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ returns one of these values:
 - If the userid *does not* exist in the system, it will
   return ``None``.
 
-For example, ``groupfinder('editor', request )`` returns ['group:editor'],
+For example, ``groupfinder('editor', request )`` returns ``['group:editor']``,
 ``groupfinder('viewer', request)`` returns [], and ``groupfinder('admin', request)``
 returns ``None``.  We will use ``groupfinder()`` as an :term:`authentication policy`
 "callback" that will provide the :term:`principal` or principals
@@ -151,10 +151,10 @@ Now add those policies to the configuration:
 
 (Only the highlighted lines need to be added.)
 
-We are enabling an ``AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy``, it is based in an
-auth ticket that may be included in the request, and an
-``ACLAuthorizationPolicy`` that uses an ACL to determine the allow or deny
-outcome for a view.
+We are enabling an ``AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy``, which is based in an
+auth ticket that may be included in the request.
+We are also enabling an ``ACLAuthorizationPolicy``, which uses an ACL to
+determine the *allow* or *deny* outcome for a view.
 
 Note that the :class:`pyramid.authentication.AuthTktAuthenticationPolicy`
 constructor accepts two arguments: ``secret`` and ``callback``.  ``secret`` is