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authorChris McDonough <chrism@agendaless.com>2009-07-03 16:24:53 +0000
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Audit grammar in bfgwik2 tutorial.
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diff --git a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/index.rst b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/index.rst
index c58822a61..4e6d9b306 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/index.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/index.rst
@@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
ZODB + Traversal Wiki Tutorial
==============================
-This tutorial introduces a :term:`traversal` -based BFG application to
-a developer with at least passing familiarity to Python. When we're
-done with the tutorial, the developer will have created a basic Wiki
-application with authentication.
+This tutorial introduces a :term:`traversal` -based :mod:`repoze.bfg`
+application to a developer familiar with Python. When we're done with
+the tutorial, the developer will have created a basic Wiki application
+with authentication.
Contents:
diff --git a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
index 8feb0d5f2..63a770299 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
+++ b/docs/tutorials/bfgwiki/installation.rst
@@ -4,18 +4,21 @@ Installation
For the most part, the installation process for this tutorial
duplicates the steps described in :ref:`installing_chapter` and
-:ref:`project_narr`.
+:ref:`project_narr`, however it also explains how to install
+additional libraries for tutorial purposes.
Preparation
========================
-The steps to prepare for the tutorial are slightly different depending
-on whether you're using UNIX or Windows.
+Please take the following steps to prepare for the tutorial. The
+steps to prepare for the tutorial are slightly different depending on
+whether you're using UNIX or Windows.
Preparation, UNIX
-----------------
-#. Obtain, install, or find `Python 2.5
+#. If you don't already have a Python 2.5 interpreter installed on
+ your system, obtain, install, or find `Python 2.5
<http://python.org/download/releases/2.5.4/>`_ for your system.
#. Install latest `setuptools` into the Python you
@@ -57,7 +60,7 @@ Preparation, UNIX
#. Use ``easy_install`` to install ``docutils``, ``repoze.tm``,
``repoze.zodbconn``, ``repoze.who``, ``nose`` and ``coverage`` from
- a *different* index (the "bfgsite" index).
+ a different custom index (the "bfgsite" index).
.. code-block:: bash
@@ -121,9 +124,9 @@ Preparation, Windows
Making a Project
================
-:mod:`repoze.bfg` supplies a variety of templates to generate sample
-projects. For this tutorial, we will use the :term:`ZODB` -oriented
-template named ``bfg_zodb``.
+Your next step is to create a project. :mod:`repoze.bfg` supplies a
+variety of templates to generate sample projects. For this tutorial,
+we will use the :term:`ZODB` -oriented template named ``bfg_zodb``.
The below instructions assume your current working directory is the
"virtualenv" named "bigfntut".